There are now four corrected drafts available for everyone's inspection:

Ben (https://members.tripod.com/~Patmos/draft/BEN.HTM).

Karin (https://members.tripod.com/~Patmos/draft/KARIN.HTM).

Kent (https://members.tripod.com/~Patmos/draft/KENT.HTM).

Norma (https://members.tripod.com/~Patmos/draft/NORMA.HTM).